Wednesday, January 28, 2009

THE MEETING POINT(Continued...)

The 7 hours of joy always stays here in my sight
The sarcastic comments because of my small height
Giggling with him on such silly issues
I wish he would have tied laces of his shoes


The whispering, his warm and unnerved arm
The glowing eyes, and the unending charm
The heavenly silence in the auto rickshaw
O lord! Boys should speak first please make it a law

“PS I LOVE U” was his precious gift
We’ll never separate, nothing can bring a rift
The nurturing love deeps n deep
His uncombed hair is a mysterious keep

The silence and passion, joy and peace
Homogenous mixture of all kept me at ease
The uneasiness prevailing in bus because of sum1’s tobacco smoke
My laughter doubled at his every "POOR JOKE"

The audacity we had dared to own before
I wish I could write something more
He proposed me n wanted to speak a lot
I looked in his eyes, tried to speak but could not :)

11 comments:

  1. i must say .. best one!!!
    awesome detailing ... ;)
    keep it up shilpi dear....

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  2. superb sweetty, aftr reading ths poem evry1 will want to be in love n those in love will go bck to dere sweet tyms, the first meet...
    really amazng yaar, hats off for ths...
    god bless u!

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  3. well I am short of words .. A really touching one.. Delves deep into the heart ..Touches every corner of the heart as well as the mind ..

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  4. i just wanna say same pinch...becoz mine is also somewhat similar to ur story...the auto rikshaw point :)

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  5. gal....
    i aint gonna believe it to be a depiction of imagination..
    its hell lot to assume that ways...
    so,accepting to the contrary,one has to say its a nice portrayal of events...
    good pictorial kind of representation to show the reader the views....
    good job,....

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  6. ohhh...mannn...are u the same dumb idiot sis of mine....???seriously super awesome (if its original :P)...ab to mujhe bhi meri poetess behan se inspire hoke teri bhabhi k liye kuch likhna padega ;-)...mmm proud of u...

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  7. this one is really gud.........
    hume nahi pata hamare beech ek painter ke saath saath poet bhi chupa hai....
    gr8 goin.....
    keep doin gud wrk

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