O! almighty
when will the time come?
when i will see my motherland
hundred percent educated,
every person will be literate then....
O!Almighty
when will the time come?
when i will see my country in controlled population.
and the increasing population
will get a complete declination
O!Almighty
when will the time come?
when i will see india free from corruption
and each and every citizen will be honest and perfect
O!Almighty
when will the time come?
when i will see india free from unemployment
not a single state in the country will suffer.....
from employment crisis
O!Almighty
when will the time come?
when the heart of the citizens of my country
will be filled with love
they will live together with an intention to serve...mankind
O!Almighty
if this will happen..
then only, my country will get seat in the line of developed nations......
yah that's true ....as only if we aspire for 100% then only we can achieve result close to that ..!!
ReplyDeletehey nice to see u strtd a blog...
ReplyDeleteu write so gud poems nice 2c u decided 2 share it..
lovely 1
nice one... good to see a patriot inside u... i wish the time comes soon... when we all live in peace and prosperity...
ReplyDeletehey,boss,its a fantastic poem.....i think this time will make our nation d seventh heaven as u covered all those points which r dragging our country 4m being 2 b d paradise...if every1 b'com so concerned den surely dis time will cum,boss...
ReplyDeleteya you are true . Its very nice 2 see the real things in a poem...here i also observing the innocence of a child who prays 2 god.
ReplyDelete"nice work"
crack poem dear !!!!
ReplyDeleteand it'll come baby!! just pray to god with "the" hope..
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if u ll write this way...
ReplyDeletei think almighty has to listen to u...
nice to see that u write so attractive poem.vaise keep it continue.....it's 100%true.
ReplyDeleteO! moti
ReplyDeletewhen will d tym come?
nice one.......truly patriotic.....good to see u doing some good stuffs......innocence felt with each line.........keep it going.........
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ReplyDeletegood...according to me.. the supreme almighty is soo loving that he has given as the freedom of what we are and what we can be.. some take it with this gratitude in there heart by believing that we have to be answerable to him for what ever sin we have done in the life (an oppurtunity) to asend to the almighty...when ppls understand this... there wont be any problem in the beautiful world
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