Sunday, January 25, 2009

SURELY I'LL DO.......

I'm not the one,
who have come here for fun.....
I've to achieve something
SOMETHING????
No!!! not something!
but many things....or everything!!!!

so,i've come here,
To make sure,
that i make my dreams.....
come true..........
Yeah! surely i'll do

The seeds of dreams
which i've sown in my heart,
have not yet ripened
and are still raw

But i know one day
they'll all be ripen
One day i'll achieve all that
i've longed for.......
and thats for sure
That .......i'll make my dreams come true
Yeah! surely i'll do. :) :)

11 comments:

  1. 1st thing i would say is "AMEN", and 2nd is really inspiring poem. You really have an unexplored talent inside you .... ans surely you are exploring :)

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  2. sahi h be.........thngs r turnin up well in words......a reflection of wat uve dun n aspire 2 do.....well dun babes

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  3. gud yaar....mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki u could write so well...chalo acha hai kuch to acha kaam karegi......just kidding yar...gud work

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  4. Good start yaar ..this much good rhythmic lines in english is really asking for praise ....!!!nice work !!

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  5. hey shilps...
    the statin lines r too gud...
    aisa lagta hai v all can relate us to dis poem of urs

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  6. kya boss,apne to mere dil ki baat keh di....we all 3rd yearites need 2 read dis poem as it will surely increse our motivations in dis time of recession....so in short dis poem is dedicated 2 ur juniors who r trapped in mody....hehehe.

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  7. boss, i m going 2 save it as i need 2 read it daily....this is so much inspiring dat it will increase my momentum....

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  8. oye awesome yaar....
    kuch likha hai......





























    aur
    kitna jhoot bolu[;)]

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  9. gr8 yaar..........
    khud likha hai na
    copy paste to nhi maara..
    bt lemmme tell u the words r simply awesome

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  10. boss aap itna achha likhti hain.wow u write just mindblowing...

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