I'm not the one,
   who have come here for fun.....
   I've to achieve something
   SOMETHING????
   No!!! not something!
   but many things....or everything!!!!
   so,i've come here,
   To make sure,
   that i make my dreams.....
   come true..........
   Yeah! surely i'll do
 
   The seeds of dreams
   which i've sown in my heart,
   have not yet ripened
   and are still raw
   But i know one day
   they'll all be ripen
   One day i'll achieve all that
   i've longed for.......
   and thats for sure
   That .......i'll make my dreams come true
   Yeah! surely i'll do.  :) :)
 
1st thing i would say is "AMEN", and 2nd is really inspiring poem. You really have an unexplored talent inside you .... ans surely you are exploring :)
ReplyDeletesahi h be.........thngs r turnin up well in words......a reflection of wat uve dun n aspire 2 do.....well dun babes
ReplyDeletegud yaar....mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki u could write so well...chalo acha hai kuch to acha kaam karegi......just kidding yar...gud work
ReplyDeleteGood start yaar ..this much good rhythmic lines in english is really asking for praise ....!!!nice work !!
ReplyDeletehey shilps...
ReplyDeletethe statin lines r too gud...
aisa lagta hai v all can relate us to dis poem of urs
kya boss,apne to mere dil ki baat keh di....we all 3rd yearites need 2 read dis poem as it will surely increse our motivations in dis time of recession....so in short dis poem is dedicated 2 ur juniors who r trapped in mody....hehehe.
ReplyDeleteboss, i m going 2 save it as i need 2 read it daily....this is so much inspiring dat it will increase my momentum....
ReplyDeletehmmm..
ReplyDeletei ll give 10 on 10..
oye awesome yaar....
ReplyDeletekuch likha hai......
aur
kitna jhoot bolu[;)]
gr8 yaar..........
ReplyDeletekhud likha hai na
copy paste to nhi maara..
bt lemmme tell u the words r simply awesome
boss aap itna achha likhti hain.wow u write just mindblowing...
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